Monday 15 October 2007 à 21:26
Voila , j'ai écrit une lettre en anglais et j'ai peur d'avoir fait des fautes d'orthographes, de syntaxes, ou de grammaires.
Est ce que quelq'un qui s'y connait en anglais , pourrait vérifier si ma lettre est correcte ??
Merci d'avance !!
Dear Jenny,
I am really happy to welcome you in my home during the summer holidays. I'm so anxious that you arrive! ! I am sure that we enjoy so much!
First I would like to introduce to you my family.
My mother Mona, is a doctor and she works in the town hall of Casablanca. She loves to read .Her favourite writer is Bernard Henri Levy. She's like to travel too.
I have a little sister who is 11 years old. Smaller, she was really unbearable. Now she grew up, she became adorable. My little sister has several hobbies. She loves drawing, painting, dancing and singing. Her friends and she often played the "Winx" it's a cartoon known by all persons of their age. "Winx" is the name of a group of fairies who battle nasty witches. (it's really stupid I know!)
I prefer to go to the movies, skate, go shopping and hang out with friends. I also like listening to rock of 80's: Scorpions, Pink Floyd and Police are my favourite rock band . I am also a fan of Indian culture, I like dancing the Tamil (it is a dance of South India) and watching bollywood's movies.
We leave in a basic apartment composed of three rooms , one kitchen , two bathroom and one salon
We are located in Casablanca, the economic capital of my country. It famous in the world because of the movie Casablanca. This coastal city is the most populated of Morocco. It has a beautiful () architectural heritage, established in the Thirties by the French protectorate. Hassan II Mosque is also a very famous monument. Its construction started in the late 70s, and was funded by the money of the Moroccan people. Once you arrive, we will visit it. I hope that you will like this wonderful Mosque
I look forward that you to come. It will be a wonderful summer.
See you soon! !
Kisses
Malak
Ce message a été modifié par malak087 - Monday 15 October 2007 à 21:27.
Est ce que quelq'un qui s'y connait en anglais , pourrait vérifier si ma lettre est correcte ??
Merci d'avance !!
Dear Jenny,
I am really happy to welcome you in my home during the summer holidays. I'm so anxious that you arrive! ! I am sure that we enjoy so much!
First I would like to introduce to you my family.
My mother Mona, is a doctor and she works in the town hall of Casablanca. She loves to read .Her favourite writer is Bernard Henri Levy. She's like to travel too.
I have a little sister who is 11 years old. Smaller, she was really unbearable. Now she grew up, she became adorable. My little sister has several hobbies. She loves drawing, painting, dancing and singing. Her friends and she often played the "Winx" it's a cartoon known by all persons of their age. "Winx" is the name of a group of fairies who battle nasty witches. (it's really stupid I know!)
I prefer to go to the movies, skate, go shopping and hang out with friends. I also like listening to rock of 80's: Scorpions, Pink Floyd and Police are my favourite rock band . I am also a fan of Indian culture, I like dancing the Tamil (it is a dance of South India) and watching bollywood's movies.
We leave in a basic apartment composed of three rooms , one kitchen , two bathroom and one salon
We are located in Casablanca, the economic capital of my country. It famous in the world because of the movie Casablanca. This coastal city is the most populated of Morocco. It has a beautiful () architectural heritage, established in the Thirties by the French protectorate. Hassan II Mosque is also a very famous monument. Its construction started in the late 70s, and was funded by the money of the Moroccan people. Once you arrive, we will visit it. I hope that you will like this wonderful Mosque
I look forward that you to come. It will be a wonderful summer.
See you soon! !
Kisses
Malak
Ce message a été modifié par malak087 - Monday 15 October 2007 à 21:27.
Monday 15 October 2007 à 21:50
malak087
Voila , j'ai écrit une lettre en anglais et j'ai peur d'avoir fait des fautes d'orthographes, de syntaxes, ou de grammaires.
Est ce que quelq'un qui s'y connait en anglais , pourrait vérifier si ma lettre est correcte ??
Merci d'avance !!
Dear Jenny,
I am really happy to welcome you in my home during the summer holidays. I'm so anxious that you arrive! ! I am sure that we enjoy so much!
Pas de s
Je dirais plus "I'm so anxious about you coming here" ou "I'm so nervous about you coming here". Ta phrase traduite c'est "Je suis si anxieux que tu arrives", ce qui n'a pas vraiment de sens.
I'm sure we will enjoy ourselves!
First I would like to introduce to you my family.
you to
My mother Mona, is a doctor and she works in the town hall of Casablanca. She loves to read .Her favourite writer is Bernard Henri Levy. She's like to travel too.
Un docteur qui travaille a la maison communale?
She likes to travel too.
I have a little sister who is 11 years old. Smaller, she was really unbearable. Now she grew up, she became adorable. My little sister has several hobbies. She loves drawing, painting, dancing and singing. Her friends and she often played the "Winx" it's a cartoon known by all persons of their age. "Winx" is the name of a group of fairies who battle nasty witches. (it's really stupid I know!)
When she was younger
Now she has grown up, and she has become adorable
Si c'est au present, c'est "play" et pas "played"
I prefer to go to the movies, skate, go shopping and hang out with friends. I also like listening to rock of 80's: Scorpions, Pink Floyd and Police are my favourite rock band . I am also a fan of Indian culture, I like dancing the Tamil (it is a dance of South India) and watching bollywood's movies.
of the 80's
rock bandS
A dance FROM South India
Bollywood movies
We leave in a basic apartment composed of three rooms , one kitchen , two bathroom and one salon.
We are located in Casablanca, the economic capital of my country. It famous in the world because of the movie Casablanca. This coastal city is the most populated of Morocco. It has a beautiful () architectural heritage, established in the Thirties by the French protectorate. Hassan II Mosque is also a very famous monument. Its construction started in the late 70s, and was funded by the money of the Moroccan people. Once you arrive, we will visit it. I hope that you will like this wonderful Mosque
I look forward that you to come. It will be a wonderful summer.
We live in a basic appartement composed of three bedrooms, one kitchen, two bathrooms, and one living room.
It's famous
THE hassan ...
70's
and was funded by the Morrocan people
I'm looking froward to you coming here
See you soon! !
Kisses
Malak
Est ce que quelq'un qui s'y connait en anglais , pourrait vérifier si ma lettre est correcte ??
Merci d'avance !!
Dear Jenny,
I am really happy to welcome you in my home during the summer holidays. I'm so anxious that you arrive! ! I am sure that we enjoy so much!
Pas de s
Je dirais plus "I'm so anxious about you coming here" ou "I'm so nervous about you coming here". Ta phrase traduite c'est "Je suis si anxieux que tu arrives", ce qui n'a pas vraiment de sens.
I'm sure we will enjoy ourselves!
First I would like to introduce to you my family.
you to
My mother Mona, is a doctor and she works in the town hall of Casablanca. She loves to read .Her favourite writer is Bernard Henri Levy. She's like to travel too.
Un docteur qui travaille a la maison communale?
She likes to travel too.
I have a little sister who is 11 years old. Smaller, she was really unbearable. Now she grew up, she became adorable. My little sister has several hobbies. She loves drawing, painting, dancing and singing. Her friends and she often played the "Winx" it's a cartoon known by all persons of their age. "Winx" is the name of a group of fairies who battle nasty witches. (it's really stupid I know!)
When she was younger
Now she has grown up, and she has become adorable
Si c'est au present, c'est "play" et pas "played"
I prefer to go to the movies, skate, go shopping and hang out with friends. I also like listening to rock of 80's: Scorpions, Pink Floyd and Police are my favourite rock band . I am also a fan of Indian culture, I like dancing the Tamil (it is a dance of South India) and watching bollywood's movies.
of the 80's
rock bandS
A dance FROM South India
Bollywood movies
We leave in a basic apartment composed of three rooms , one kitchen , two bathroom and one salon.
We are located in Casablanca, the economic capital of my country. It famous in the world because of the movie Casablanca. This coastal city is the most populated of Morocco. It has a beautiful () architectural heritage, established in the Thirties by the French protectorate. Hassan II Mosque is also a very famous monument. Its construction started in the late 70s, and was funded by the money of the Moroccan people. Once you arrive, we will visit it. I hope that you will like this wonderful Mosque
I look forward that you to come. It will be a wonderful summer.
We live in a basic appartement composed of three bedrooms, one kitchen, two bathrooms, and one living room.
It's famous
THE hassan ...
70's
and was funded by the Morrocan people
I'm looking froward to you coming here
See you soon! !
Kisses
Malak
Voila j'ai corrigé quelques petites choses.
Ce message a été modifié par clueless - Monday 15 October 2007 à 21:55.
Monday 15 October 2007 à 22:01
Merci bcp bcp bcp cluless , 
(Un docteur qui travaille a la maison communale? )
En effet ma mère -medecin- travaille à la marie (town hall ne signifie pas mairie ??
)
(Un docteur qui travaille a la maison communale?
) En effet ma mère -medecin- travaille à la marie (town hall ne signifie pas mairie ??
)Wednesday 17 October 2007 à 14:26
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